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- Sun May 13, 2012 8:31 pm
- Forum: Writers Forum
- Topic: Checking for interest and looking for editor(s)/prereader(s)
- Replies: 10
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Re: Checking for interest and looking for editor(s)/prereade
I like chapter 1. The main character is funny and a bit quirky. I enjoy the leaning on the fourth wall aspect of the narration, but I think it's important to remember to only use that in moderation. New Oatleans has a school system? I wasn't expecting anything like that in the wasteland, but that d...
- Sat May 12, 2012 3:21 pm
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: What stories do you recommend to read?
- Replies: 12
- Views: 99959
Re: What stories do you recommend to read?
Is this only speaking of FO:E stories, or just in general?
For FO:E side-stories, of course there are Project Horizons and Pink Eyes. Heroes is an awesome one, and I love Murky Number Seven too. I've got a few more on my list to read, I'll post here again if I recommend them.
For FO:E side-stories, of course there are Project Horizons and Pink Eyes. Heroes is an awesome one, and I love Murky Number Seven too. I've got a few more on my list to read, I'll post here again if I recommend them.
- Sat May 12, 2012 2:06 pm
- Forum: Writers Forum
- Topic: Checking for interest and looking for editor(s)/prereader(s)
- Replies: 10
- Views: 38451
Re: Checking for interest and looking for editor(s)/prereade
First post updated with Chapter 1, completely unedited except for my own re-read. Let me know what you guys think, and provide any constructive criticism you all have. And please enjoy!
- Mon May 07, 2012 11:50 am
- Forum: Writers Forum
- Topic: Checking for interest and looking for editor(s)/prereader(s)
- Replies: 10
- Views: 38451
Re: Checking for interest and looking for editor(s)/prereade
Awesome! I'll be sure to get you a link to Ch.1 when I get it finished, thanks a bunch! And even pointing out little things would be excellent, every bit helps!
- Sun May 06, 2012 5:25 pm
- Forum: Writers Forum
- Topic: Checking for interest and looking for editor(s)/prereader(s)
- Replies: 10
- Views: 38451
Re: Checking for interest and looking for editor(s)/prereade
You would be correct in your assumption about New Oatleans, it is a city with both a zebra and pony population, and a mostly stable economy. You are also correct about the Remnant there. Correct, Shayl will be fleshed out much more in the next chapters, I purposely kept her mysterious to this point....
- Sat May 05, 2012 11:57 pm
- Forum: Writers Forum
- Topic: Checking for interest and looking for editor(s)/prereader(s)
- Replies: 10
- Views: 38451
Checking for interest and looking for editor(s)/prereader(s)
So, I have written up a prologue for an idea I have for a side-story, and would like to see any interest level in this, and if anyone is interested, editor(s) and/or pre-reader(s). If you want to give any feedback (don't be gentle, I have a tough hide when it comes to criticism) please post it here ...
- Sat May 05, 2012 10:52 pm
- Forum: Introductions
- Topic: Salutations and welcomings
- Replies: 6
- Views: 29759
Re: Salutations and welcomings
Heya Fuzzy, I know I'm new as well, but welcome!
Also, I love Murky, great job on it!
Also, I love Murky, great job on it!
- Sat May 05, 2012 5:27 pm
- Forum: Introductions
- Topic: new buck here or there somewhere
- Replies: 4
- Views: 23220
Re: new buck here or there somewhere
Thank you all for the welcomes!
- Sat May 05, 2012 9:10 am
- Forum: Introductions
- Topic: new buck here or there somewhere
- Replies: 4
- Views: 23220
new buck here or there somewhere
Hello everyone. I'm Cariion, and of course I'm a big fan of MLP and FO:E. Look forward to good talks with ya'll and to see the works some of you are coming up with. I've got a idea for my own side-story as well, and a prologue written up for it, and may post it here sometime to see interest. Good to...