Fallout Equestria: Armed Redemption

[Ironmonger]

Alright, so I don't exactly need proofreading, but I would greatly appreciate it if someone would look over my story and point out any oddities or things I could improve. Most of what I get is lurkers and not much feedback aside from my co-author and idea-guys.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/42508/F ... Redemption