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								by otherunicorn » Mon Jan 16, 2012 2:29 am
			
			
			
			
			Proofread 
 
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								by Pinkie Pie! » Mon Jan 16, 2012 4:26 am
			
			
			
			
			Awesome! Thanks a lot, your proofreading has really helped me!
			
			
									
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								by Pinkie Pie! » Thu Jan 19, 2012 3:13 pm
			
			
			
			
			
			
			
									
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								by Pinkie Pie! » Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:48 am
			
			
			
			
			I am very glad that you keep pointing out my various errors, it really helps improving the quality!
			
			
									
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								by Pinkie Pie! » Wed Jan 25, 2012 7:48 pm
			
			
			
			
			Chapter 5 is up now! Read, comment, criticise, you know, the usual deal  

 
			
			
									
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								by Pinkie Pie! » Fri Jan 27, 2012 10:10 am
			
			
			
			
			Aaaaand fixed. I also couldn't find an alternative for partly and part, sadly.
			
			
									
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								by Pinkie Pie! » Tue Feb 07, 2012 3:47 pm
			
			
			
			
			Chapter 6: Revenge is up for proofreading. I'm afraid I made a bit of a mess out of this one though.
 
			
			
									
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								by otherunicorn » Wed Feb 08, 2012 4:18 pm
			
			
			
			
			I'll get to it when I can, I'm trying to get my own one up for proof reading today too.